Review – “The Sleeping Dead” by Richard Farren Barber

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Despite what the title and cover suggests, this novella from DarkFuse isn’t a zombie story. It has a similar anticipatory aura at the outset, but rather than delivering adrenaline and the undead, this tale brings a haunting and disturbed take on the apocalypse.The Sleeping DeadJackson Smith has a job interview, but notices during his bus journey into the city that something is askew. People seem distracted or silently adrift, and upon a bridge that becomes the scene of a suicide, Jackson finds himself succumbing to the dreamlike haze, entranced by the dark river that claimed the body.

He makes it to his interview up on the 8th floor of an office building, but after a series of increasingly gruesome deaths – and a sinister and enticing voice that has begun in his head – he realises that the city is gripped by some kind of suicide plague.

Trying to ignore the suggestions of his subconscious, Jackson latches on to the vague hope of finding his girlfriend Donna and ventures out into the burning city to find her.

This novella is superbly written, snaring us immediately with the author’s vision of an ordinary day turned to hell. Richard Farren Barber never tells us anything but simply lets us realise, and it’s always nice to be seamlessly informed yet unpatronised by an author.

Jackson himself is a normal and generally decent fellow, perhaps even rather bland, but this only accentuates the horror that intrudes into the urban mundanity. His reactions to the unpleasant events are very human, as is the way he grasps at a tangible goal – his girlfriend waiting for him – to try and bring cohesion and focus to the madness.

I particularly liked the novella’s pervading sense of nightmare. It begins subtly with a rocking man on the bus whom Jackson believes to be mentally ill, cranks up the unease through the silent witnessing of the suicide, and then really puts us on edge during the interview when one of the panel starts rocking and angrily mumbling to himself. I actually enjoyed this rollercoaster hill-climb more than when the city finally capsized.

But that’s not to say the apocalypse is a disappointment. It’s beautifully painted, full of grim and heartbreaking images of the oddly gentle carnage. Some people kill themselves, others slip into catatonia where they sit, presumably lost to their own whispering psyches. Jackson is left to battle himself as he wanders the city with Susan, a woman whose suicide he managed to avert, and they’re a pleasingly awkward team. Bound by circumstance and clinging to rationality, their relationship is suitably strained and soporific as both struggle to stay afloat.

I did find the second half slightly overlong and a more fleshed-out conclusion or an extra plot device or two might have assuaged its length for me. But this might also have distracted from the mood, not to mention Jackson’s internal voice. This is the essence of the scourge, and the most effective of villains: inescapable, parasitic and very creepy.

There’s little action, so if the cover had you hoping for scrabbling hordes and white-knuckle bloodshed, then you’ll be disappointed. Nor is it for those who prefer neat concrete packages with all their questions answered. But I loved the lingering menace of “The Sleeping Dead” and was left restless and bothered without quite being able to say why. Which is exactly how Jackson Smith’s day began…

Review – “The Power of Nothing” by Richard Farren Barber

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I’ve only read a story by Richard Farren Barber once before – the excellent reflection of war that is “Last Respects” from the Derby Scribes anthology of 2011 – and it stood out for its pathos and evocation. His new novella from Damnation Books is more of a horror genre piece, and I was pleased to discover that beneath that atmospheric cover is a slick and involving work.The Power of NothingSteve is a normal young man who works on a flagging high street that seems to be frequented by bored hoodies more than shoppers. One day while working, he spots a pale, wispy-haired stranger outside – the gray man – who seems to be staring at him.

This silent and unnerving figure keeps reappearing in Steve’s life – when he’s walking home or helping out at the local youth club – and he starts to question if it’s even really there. He’s soon driven to rage, but discovers that even violence won’t keep his ghostly stalker at bay.

I quite liked Steve. He’s sensible with his social conscience, and empathises with the disaffected kids that feature in his routine. His grounded attitude drew me into the story immediately, and also helped with the necessary identification as he battles with his pragmatic side against what he can actually see.

The growing menace of this story is strong and never ebbs whether our troubled protagonist is at work in the shop, walking the lamplit streets at dusk, or in a boisterous club. This creepy vibe really keeps the pages turning, especially when Steve’s grip starts to falter, and the ongoing presence of disenfranchised youth as well as the gray man keep us guessing as to how it’s all going to pan out.

Sometimes a prose style is worthy of remark due to it being particularly poetic or flamboyant, but I love it that this author is largely invisible. His attention to detail is brilliant, as are his turns of phrase, but there’s never any intrusion to the experience and he lets the characters, plot and sense of place take command of the storytelling.

I enjoyed “The Power of Nothing”. It has an uncluttered concept and the themes of inevitability and control add a bit of substance, as does subtle social commentary. My only real gripe was that the pace dipped towards the end, and a couple of these chapters could perhaps have benefitted from a trim. Several scenes involving Steve telling the gray man to fuck off and leave him alone became quite repetitive, but this lull precedes a splendidly downbeat and unpredictable finale that meant my complaint was instantly forgiven. Richard Farren Barber pulls off that difficult feat of a conclusion that inspires wry reflection and also throws light – or is that darkness – back across the story as a whole.

Well played, sir. I’ll be back for more.